Sunday, April 17, 2011

Sly Killers

Tigers creep,
          Closer to their prey,
                                Precarious infants learn,
                                                            Life is austere,
                                                                      Apprehensive to their surroundings,
                                                                                                   See the prey

Step out into the vision of

Sly Killers 

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  1. Ms. ValleApril 19, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    This concrete poem is really cool! I like how the words "creep" along the way and "step out" at the end.

    Just a suggestion - you could use a stronger word like "pounce" instead of step out because tigers are POWERFUL!!!!

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